This was an excellent homage to the original story, Nancy. One of the most satisfying parts was when Briggs got what he deserved! I was so shocked when he pulled out the gun and shot Elijah's mom. Completely unexpected.
I am glad I found your Substack. The edginess and surprises didn’t disappoint! You bring the moment into sharp focus. Is this a book or a short story? Made me want to see more. My Grandpa is “Miles” too
This was an excellent homage to the original story, Nancy. One of the most satisfying parts was when Briggs got what he deserved! I was so shocked when he pulled out the gun and shot Elijah's mom. Completely unexpected.
Thanks Shane!
Great twist! Nicely done.
I am glad I found your Substack. The edginess and surprises didn’t disappoint! You bring the moment into sharp focus. Is this a book or a short story? Made me want to see more. My Grandpa is “Miles” too
The twist! I didn’t see it coming, but I really enjoyed this! Glad the principal wasn’t able to make it 😠😈
Thanks!
Such a satisfying twist at the end. You had me guessing what was happening the whole time...excellent tension. Thanks for contributing to TMV!
Thank you!
That was an unexpected twist! I liked that!
Thanks Jane!
Nice twist on the original story!
Excellent job, Nancy. Well done. - Jim
Thanks so much Jim!