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Sussurant Horror's avatar

Lovely writing and great visual set-up! I could see it all very clearly as if I were there!

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Nancy Waddell's avatar

Thanks so much!

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FranB's avatar

Next time I see a dry stone wall, I will give it a wide berth!! Very atmospheric.

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Nancy Waddell's avatar

Thanks Fran!

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K.M. Bennett's avatar

I'm thankful to your story for encouraging me to look up the meaning of "zygomatic bone." Also, great story!

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Nancy Waddell's avatar

Thanks lol!

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K.M. Bennett's avatar

It's exciting to learn fun new words! 😄

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Jean Marie Bauhaus's avatar

Riveting! Loved the found footage aspect.

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Nancy Waddell's avatar

Thank you Jean Marie!

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Ken Flyingheart's avatar

Great blend of lore and found footage. Very well written and that drooping eye was a very jarring visual. Such a great story!

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Nancy Waddell's avatar

Thank you!

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Lyndsey Resnick's avatar

Creepy stone walls and ghost hunters! Set up worked with the transition to the modern day "found footage" feel. Loved it!

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Nancy Waddell's avatar

Thanks so much Lyndsey, I’m glad you loved it!

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